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Open Poetry #27

Is this all?

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-03 10:02 PM

My first glance
into this world.
Is this really
all I seem to see?
Clumsy violence crushes innocense..
Nod my head negatively,
is this all there is to be?

..like a never ending idiotic escapade,
what are you thinking?

Once things grow silent, is there no peace?
Or just rage
growing covertly
into sunset..I suspect.
My flames grow dim
as we near the end..

..Or it's just the suspense
of whether it has yet
to even begin.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-07-04 06:54 AM

Kaoru, this is very intense and .... the doubt in the end yes .... happened to me too.
... new beginnings always!
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-07-04 11:43 AM

No, that is not all there is--for there are always beginnings after the ends!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-07-04 12:02 PM

wishing you newness and belief in things unseen but yet to encompass your being...shake the negative and give way to the all powerful positive...believe!

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2003-07-05 10:57 AM

"..Or it's just the suspense
of whether it has yet
to even begin."

Yes, I think by using ... anticipation ... one can lighted up and eventually begin to have joy ... again. It's not over until it's over.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-05 01:18 PM

it's difficult not to be a little disappointed

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