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A Cappella
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A Cappella |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 Greenery in Nan's yard after the rain In such soft whisperlings this stilling night Manifesting itself almost stillborn On this summer evening zephyr's caress. Impetuously, a cappella rises overhead. Soon it harmonizes in windy wisps Setting lofty trees to sway in a ballet That would caress even the coldest soul. In that split second, I felt it. The change. Floating downward in a mist at first, Crystal rivulets circled and quenched A very sequestered and parched heart. My tongue tasted its nectar. My skin absorbed the essence it so needed To replenish a craving so long overdue. And as I, Branches of the shadowed trees Waved their arms dancing in resplendence. High overhead, clouds like solemn ships Sailing their course over the vast expanse of sky Eclipsed the soon to be sleeping moon. All the while it glides and rides the wind Like a spinnaker torn to waft unsteadily In a pending dark and evil storm. But then once more so softly it lands, Tenderly blankets, and rejuvenates. As stars glimmer and reflect Off the slicker below them A shimmering puddle reveals Soon all will be once more in passive rest. Here I sit, watching the harbour, Among swaying blades of grass, Dancing moss, and lacy ferns. I inhale the essence of flora, fauna, And a human soul that are so alike. All around me blended in hues of invisibility Is evidence of this valuable gift. This one time I became part of it all, Witnessing a wonder of the our world, A cappella in the rain. ~ * ~ It rained refreshment today * © Mysteria 06/2003 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling serenely-- written in a hush and read in a whisper-- true majesty, lady. You see world in worlds in worlds...  Miss you! Just lovely. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Breathtakingly beautiful Sharon... Nan's garden must be beautiful... yes, especially after a soft rain. Wonderful pic as well. ~Hugs and Smiles...Have a great time!~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am librarying this lovely in it's own new shelf - Mysteria's shelf. With a spotlight. Lady...with the exception of the poems you have written for Willow....this is one of the finest, softest, most exquisite poems I have yet to read in Passions. Sometimes it takes a Village to make a community of poets...sometimes, it takes a Visionary to bring it together. Sometimes, I think Ron never had a hint at what he would do for over 7,000 family members.... did you? Now, before I make a mistake, I'm going to library this, add the spotlight...and thank God I have come to know people like you, and Nan, and Ron. Hugs.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon...a painting of grace, your words are spirit blessed.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well you have truly made me blush. I wrote this during a downpour today in the Cape. I welcomed it while others ran for cover. Nan walked with me in it, and Nan, the rain and I "bonded" so to speak. I finally got a welcome taste of home that will see me through another two weeks of this unfamiliar heat that seems to lack a breeze. With every single drop of rain that someone curses I always smile realizing it saved at least one plant or an animal, and today it saved me Thank you all so very kindly for your lovely comments.Karilea, I don't think Ron fathomed what this place would ever become, however I do think he should be extremely proud of what he has given to the world as his contribution to stimulate minds by the writing of poetry. I know there are over 7,000 grateful people that is for sure, and I am just one. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-03-2003 10:27 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, this is the most beautiful poem I have ever seen about the rain, I do believe. It was a beautiful, graceful, and peaceful poem. This ending just set the whole poem off.... Here I sit, watching the harbour, Among swaying blades of grass, Dancing moss, and lacy ferns. I inhale the essence of flora, fauna, And a human soul that are so alike. All around me blended in hues of invisibility Is evidence of this valuable gift. This one time I became part of it all, Witnessing a wonder of the our world, A cappella in the rain. I loved all of it, and am going to keep it, too. Hugs to you two Ethel Pssstttt...I'm missing you, too  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my, oh my ... Sharon, this vacation is inspiring you to the highest, my friend. What a breath taking piece. Wonderful phrasing and imagery ... loved this! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Breathing in this beauty ... as you breathed the rain-refreshed air. So very enjoyable! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely. Sounds like you like this part of the country. The rain is great after one of these steamy days, isn't it? Hugs Sandra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I find it amazing how different 80 degrees is in the East compared to the West, simply amazing. It is all in the breeze and the rainfall, I think but then again I am no scientist This inspire came from watching a group of young men in Nantucket doing a cappella, the rain that day, and the mist that was rising on Nan's yard after the rain (I have never seen that before), hence the poem and I am so happy you enjoyed it. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
80 degrees? May I come join you? LOL 80 and humid sure seems like heaven compared to 97 and humid. *G* This is beautiful, Mysteria... I could see the gentle renewal unfolding through your words... and the picture is wonderful. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Impetuously, a cappella rises overhead. Soon it harmonizes in windy wisps Setting lofty trees to sway in a ballet That would caress even the coldest soul In deepest gratitude, this is one of the most endearing writes I've ever read...thank you for sharing. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sharon, I do believe you may have outdone yourself with this food-for-the-soul write. It is most assuredly a  !!!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Wonderful write and I'd love to see you A cappella in the rain. LOL  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
High overhead, clouds like solemn ships Sailing their course over the vast expanse of sky Eclipsed the soon to be sleeping moon. All the while it glides and rides the wind Like a spinnaker torn to waft unsteadily In a pending dark and evil storm. But then once more so softly it lands, Tenderly blankets, and rejuvenates. As stars glimmer and reflect Off the slicker below them A shimmering puddle reveals Soon all will be once more in passive rest. Here I sit, watching the harbour, Among swaying blades of grass, Dancing moss, and lacy ferns. I inhale the essence of flora, fauna, And a human soul that are so alike. All around me blended in hues of invisibility Is evidence of this valuable gift. This one time I became part of it all, Witnessing a wonder of the our world, A cappella in the rain. ============================= Well this is just the loveliest of lovely... and a keeper for sure. How wonderful a moment for you and Nan to share...and just look at the beauty it inspired in your pen. Stunning write of imagery and the heart of friendship. You two are a delight. Wonderful writing poetess Sharon. Well ... OK ... but you have to wash it first. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mysteria - you're writings are amazing, such as this one is... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the rain so much and how the raindrops reflect prisms and crystal from the leaves and grass after the clouds stop crying! (kiss on cheek) Yay, this is a heavenly symphony, God Bless You, we all love you so much! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sharon ... my dear special friend. This is so exquisite and calming that it brought me to tears. I have not been feeling well since you and Nan were here and these beautiful words lifted my spirits and brought me such joy. I'm sorry you are melting in the New England sun and humidity. It has been so dreadfully hot in Boston today and tomorrow promises to be worse. I suggest you grab a fan and sit in front of the TV tonight and watch the Boston Pops and fireworks. Hugs and loves to you and Nan, Marti |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A lovely tarantella beating out the rhythm of life. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know ... I seem to sense that this might have inspired you all to write something about nature? If it did, then I am pleased I did more than I set out to do, and thank you once again for your kindness to me and for also enjoying this one. I kind of liked this one myself and I never say that  Marti, we will call - until then - take care and I watched the 4th of July on a beach with Nan and her kids it was great! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-05-2003 12:13 AM).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll never look at all that greenery outside my window quite the same way again... This is wonderful, my Mysterical friend...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sharon, goodness this is beauty You know, it reminds of after a rainfall how you can just smell the Earth, you know? rebirth - truly this is amazing writing Lady xxoo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
littlewing - Yes! I do know. That is my favorite thing to do, go out into the street after the rain and just breathe in really deep. It is not only cleaning for the air but us too. I can NOT wait for it it rain here in Cape Cod I swear I am melting away honest! |
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