Open Poetry #27 |
....Summertime.....(acrostic) |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sultry days of hammock swing Under folding, azure canopy sky Midday checkered picnic with waving willows Melons ripened to utter perfection Evening's calm is sea-breeze scented Row, row , row your boat... Treasure shells buried in diamond beige Ice cream parlours each corner beckons Make mine pralines and cream ! Entwined limbs of tan caress sunset sheets . . . . Chris Barker~ July 2003~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Chris, I hear ice tinkling in a glass of lemonade...nice.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Chris, This is lovely. I am smiling at my memories of childhood and summertime. Thanks! Patricia |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou scorpio and Patricia. I just love the summer! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Loving this Chris!! Especially the last 'e'. ~Hugs and miss ya, Teed~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Still love the new do... and you did this so well... Annabelle is smiling! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Nancylee and Karilea. I did the Passionate Plummet....but landed on a big cloud of cotton candy. So...it's all good as the young ones say! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That's a special art, making 'em balance on three axes....makes me want to try it! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Aye loved this Chris but make mine a mint oreo blizzard..mmmmmmmmmmm blizzardy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love this summerland of yours... Such a sweet and charming way you have Chris. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, you are really good at writing these. I guess I kind of gave up on it. Hugs Ethel |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Chris you do these acrostics, very well. Just beautiful. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very beautiful, Chris! :rainbow ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wonderful work, my friend... I enjoyed very much! *S* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
May you all have a wonderful summer season. Happy 4th of July to all my American friends |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Delightful! May all your summertimes be as such! Have a happy summer! EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You have a blissful summer as well Linda....thankyou! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - clever write... BC |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris....A lovely summer you write! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Chris, this is beautiful, sweet friend, nope, my ice cream flavor has to be raspberry sherbet or rocky road, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful delightful gem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill, Martie & Noah, thankyou so much for reading and commenting! hugs. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
Great write!! I really love your style. Hope to see more of your work soon! ~*Summer*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
thankyou vandana & Into The Flames. |
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