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Stars Shine my Way
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Stars Shine my Way |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
I endured the tears That glazed my pupils thin And then I realized That this is what begins The reminder of myself What I used to be And what can never come Close to being me The absense tears a hole Inside my security To be ripped apart Trapped in anxiety I can't take much more My hope is dragging down Like a pigment inside of me Buried in the ground Thoughts ache beneathe my skin An etching to reality In my hand the razor burns Another deformality Everything a breath away From being made to cease Everything can fall apart In this mainstream of disease Inside I am so worthless A living wound to see With no repair to its thoughts That make whats inside me To take it all away Just one moment falls Would the stars shine my way And decorate my fall Would they trail my good byes And share what I had to offer |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
This was a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
really well written about a tough subject |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...very moving...tragic...it drew me in and I couldn't stop reading it...MANY times! |
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