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"I Do" (for GR)
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"I Do" (for GR) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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I could give you a thousand kisses, but that would never be enough, My heart could suffer ten thousand pains to prove my love, I could fly to the moon, sing you our loves tune,(Stairway to Heaven), but that would never be enough, My heart could write stories and poems, talk sweetly to you all day long, Jump through all the hoops, dinner and date, stay up late, but that would never be enough, I could capture every star, cry every tear in my eye, give you the sun in the sky, but that would never be enough, To prove my love to you, all I have to say... "I Do!" [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-04-2003 01:17 AM).] |
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luckyme9293 Junior Member
since 2003-07-01
Posts 24tx |
Its beautiful, and in a different formate, i liked it alot. keep writing |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I've a question....What's GR stand for?  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write, and promise GoldenRose should be a very happy man! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Beautifuly happy i am....thank you my darling lady such poetry does me honour....i love both it and you.... Goldenrose. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes you do, but don't say it until you meet face to face...and share that first kiss...and spend some time together...or have these already happened...james |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how awesome, simply beautiful, fills my heart with happy thoughts, God bless you and yours, and this lovely poem of love you have gifted and shared here. |
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freespirit Junior Member
since 2003-07-03
Posts 24USA |
I am new to passions and just loved reading the poems between you two. Keep it up! They inspire me!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks to eveyone who replied! This poem was just a thought while reading, being inspired, touched, by Goldenroses poetry, and listening to some music, just as any relationship you should always take your time...."love takes time".... [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-04-2003 01:16 AM).] |
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