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Siding by My Side
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Siding by My Side |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Twin desires set the sky on fire igniting the flare siding by my side complacent in the kindling cuddling beneath the blaze cloaked in a night jacket draped in dark blue velvet lighting up the stars sizzles soft and scorching blowing smoke into the flames dangerously consumed caught up in the rapture dying down in ashes buried under covers keeps me warm. ~*~ |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I love your passionate writing.  Jason |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ahhhh, thank you for that Jason~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...Sounds like cozy lovely.  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"complacent in the kindling cuddling beneath the blaze cloaked in a night jacket draped in dark blue velvet lighting up the stars" Not a bad way to spend an evening!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks a bunch Dixie, Martie and Duncan... Ahem, I like to think this has poetential but it should have stayed on the drawing board a little longer, so back it goes! Happy 4th and lots of hugs and all that~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
If it does, I hope you post it again when it's better....cuz this rendition is mighty good. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Now that is the kind of 4th of July I wish to celebrate! Enjoyed. |
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