Open Poetry #27 |
Smooth Sailing |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~*~ Uphill, downhill, then up and down again. East side, west side, then 'round about the bend. Pacing, racing, stressing to extreme. Someone stole my paddles, now I cannot row up stream. If I were in, canoe again, and simply went with flow, I'd be heading in the opposite way, of where I'd want to go! You may ask, why buck the tides, they fight you tooth and nail. Why not head, down easy creek, and raise a tall wide sail? Perhaps the thief, who took my oars, prevented me from failing. For I changed my path, let go of wrath, and now my life's smooth sailing! ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-02-2003 06:05 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Great write |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am clueless as to why this is sitting down here... OK, back to up there ya go. start rowing!!! Great message, Linda.. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Perfect example of that old saying, "When life gives you lemons...", errrr I mean, "No use crying over...". Darn it, what was the one for when you oars get thieved? |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Say Duncan is that like "Up A Creek Without A Paddle?" HUmmmmmm??? Good write EA. Bonnie j aka Bon-Bon |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Blessing in disguise...I try to look for those too. You know, I think you remind me of concepts I once knew but lost somewhere along the way. That's why I love your work, kiddo! Patricia |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
your thoughts are hope for the hopeless in a hopeless situation! I liked the line about the paddles! A Romantic Heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kaoru ~ Thank you! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Magnus ~ Sir Lancelot, this lady is beholden to thee for thy gallantry... Goodknight, sire! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Duncan ~ As I was reading your reply, I was drinking an ice-cold glass of spring water with fresh-squeezed lemons! Can you see me through the monitor? Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bonnie ~ Ah! Yes! The proberbial creek without a paddle! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patricia ~ From what I have gleanded from your poetry, the "concepts" still dwell within you, Dear One! Sleep well! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ARH ~ It is gratifying when a reader enjoys my thoughts! Huggums, EA |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Earth Angel...What true and inspirational poem you've written here. The Bible says to forgive or your Heavenly Father will not forgive you. That's the reason some have such rough waters...unforgiveness. Great poem!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mabbye one day, I'll join you there [This message has been edited by passing shadows (07-03-2003 02:12 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ivy Rose ~ Thank you very much for that lovely, and inspirational reply! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ Dixie, you can count on it! Truly! --and I'll enjoy reading about it! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! That's right, choppy river, this angel's going to go down the smooth creek from now on, yay! (does happy dance) God Bless You, sweet friend, wherever we follow Him we will find the light and comfort, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ That's for sure! I got tired of trying to wend my way up that creek without a paddle! Now I go with the flow!--It is the Zen way of being! Friends forever, Linda |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
lovely lyrical writing...Linda..loved the perfect ryme as usual.. Goldenrose. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goldenrose ~ Why, thank you, Dear Rose of Gold! Warm hugs, EA |
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