Open Poetry #27 |
Written to the crowd |
idleeyes86 Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 64Somewhere over the rainbow |
These are actually song lyrics from our band (Idleeyes) but I thought I'd post it to take me to 50 posts as really music and lyric writing was what got me into poetry and this is one of our better ones. Written to the Crowd Corridors of faces Lighting overhead They're happy to bear witness to the music in his head Stiff fingers from the cold Cold heart from what's been said They're happy to bear witness To the music in his head Banished to the corner The pen on his paper's dead They're happy to bear witness To the music in his head Yet why are they so happy? As he wails about couples wed? They're happy to bear witness to the music, in his head. Everybody hurts, take comfort in your friends, cos everybody hurts sometimes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice...*s M |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I like. I want to hear the song, though. Could you email a recording of it to me? "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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idleeyes86 Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 64Somewhere over the rainbow |
thanx as soon as I find a recording i'll send it over, we've sent all our cd's to venues and stuff and I forgot to copy them onto my computer, as soon as a get another copy i'll send it over Everybody hurts, take comfort in your friends, cos everybody hurts sometimes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! put me on the list too! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I think it should be called Written in his head lol just a thought ARCTIC WIND |
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