Open Poetry #27 |
To Pull a Thread |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To pull a Thread I wander on a symbols thread That starts when I’m asleep in bed It leads me into wonders field Where fantasy is made to yield Blue thistle grows like fields of rye And blends into the blue of sky The air is fresh with morning mist The picture warms my heart with bliss And there amongst the greenery The lush of flowers scenery Waits the essence of the theme The wistful body of the dream The essence of my wile of trace Shouldered in mantilla lace Holding out her arms in wait An Angel in a spirits state Still I’ve never touched this grace This symbol of a threads embrace |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The essence of my wile of trace Shouldered in mantilla lace Holding out her arms in wait An Angel in a spirits state Goodmorning Seymour, This is so beautiful. Thank you, Sir. Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Good morning dear and I wish you a pleasant day. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The essence of my wile of trace Shouldered in mantilla lace Holding out her arms in wait An Angel in a spirits state Still I’ve never touched this grace This symbol of a threads embrace" Morning Sy! What beautiful words to awaken to! Hope your day is just as beautiful. Tea's on....I'll pour. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sweet Sonnateer! The images and sensations are so incredibly appealing to me. This poem is most assuredly a . You write with such grace, beauty and emotion. You put the "P" in Poet, the "S" in sonneteer, and the "W" in wonderful! Have a glorious day, you wonderful, sonnateer poet! EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
[oh gee, Sun...are you really going to say it? Oh No...] Sy, this just unraveled me.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Goodmorning seymour! Here I am! After an ENTIRE night's sleep too--not only did I pull a thread? I took the time to knit me back together again this time. This morning stuff is kinda nice the way normal folks do it. tipping my coffee mug to ya. ah..coffee and a morning verse from sy! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Blue thistle grows like fields of rye And blends into the blue of sky ======================= You paint my sky with a Sy-sigh and give a moth mantilla wings to fly. *ww* BEAUTIFUL write Stinkylove. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, I swear that you could take a glance about you, and write a masterpiece on any subject at hand, my good friend!! As one whose 'other' hobby is sewing, I appreciated this one, too!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, you know that I love all of your writes, but this one is a and I am tucking it in my library. Warm banana bread with tea to-day? okie dokie. hugs, Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you and I'll be right there. Earth Angel And you write and act just like an angel. Sunshine I needed your thread. LOL Hugs. serenity, And a wonderful comment from you. Hugs JM, I see no moth that flies with me But a butterfly with raspberry tea. WWRS Sunnyone You are a doll, enjoyed your comment. Chris, okie dokie, hugs. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Blue thistle grows like fields of rye And blends into the blue of sky The air is fresh with morning mist The picture warms my heart with bliss And this poem warms mine. *S* I like this beauty very much, Seymour. *G* Of course, I'm ROFL @ Sunshine... she beat me to it! LOL |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Shouldered in mantilla lace yes... such a delightful image... thanks, Seymour for this regards sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Yes sunshine is a whip. Sudhir, Thank you my friend. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
But what a lovely dream to wake up to. I can feel it. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pilgrimage Thank you for the nicely done. |
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