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Two Paths |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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i wrote this but its just a simple poem its prob not even good but still i wrote it and i write stuff for reasons hope you see the reasons within it and tell me if its no good be honest _____________________________________________ Two paths lay before me One to my left, and one to my right I stood and wondered what path to take Knowing that I couldn’t travel both I looked to the left Filled with beauty and light And then to the right Filled with darkness and hate I turned to the right Into darkness I walked Knowing after the darkness Did came light after all If I’d of chosen the left not the right From the light of happiness I’d of walked Back into the dark lonely night |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a very good poem. I really enjoyed it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, the fork in the road... I am still standing there. Good write here, enjoyed the strength and wisdom. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed,,, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is a sad write indeed  ARCTIC WIND |
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