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"woes in chamber"
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"woes in chamber" |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
all these disappearences..all these cornerstones... she said a relative was visiting..in her diary, she left this line...and as well,me waiting till the end of time.. could i stand here all day long hoping she'll show up standing,staring at the pink sky... as the sun says goodnight i'm saying to her doorstep goodbye.. how relieved i was when her message played... the cremated list of broken denial,jabbed into spikes,and the lines are spayed and that line she wrote saying.. our love is an ocean run dry... an ocean run dry... the tears began to pour from my heart and the hurt filled it as well the ventrilces collapse,and breaks loose the hell... and the night began to be all so long... so now what do i do.. i never saw this coming..and where were you... this wasn't in the cards.. where do i go from here.. all i could was drive and drive burn regret and the wasted years.. see where the pavement could take me see where the heartache would leave me.... miseries and woes... just dig my hole right now so badly i wanna ask her why.... why... the corniche is the last stop for now the freedom to know i can leave this behind... we were all i had..and it's sunken in the mire of the chimes... and it's gone... a few days later no response or reply the relative long gone but she never said bye-bye good riddance to what was never really mine... i don't mind... this was the last of her relapsed life.. i think her mom said she never said goodbye... i was lost in my trance...so no attention was payed no piece of her spared just severed the ties... in her diary she left this line i really couldn't read it until the pages were dry.. she said... i awaken from an eternal sleep to hold you.. i awaken from a boundless noise to know you.. a chance to reminisce...mercy please... awake me.. nocturnal slumber..i'd never believe... i awaken...? all these disappearences..all these cornerstones |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
to those who reply be frank as hell |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda sad, but a good write. I had a bit of trouble distinguishing between what she said and what you're writing, had to read it twice to get the full meaning, stumbled a few times but hey, I stumble a lot these days *shrugging shoulders* |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed,,, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
sad indeed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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