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Open Poetry #27

Silver Time

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-01 03:17 PM

Silver Time

something
in the night
stirred me
to go running
down the moon
this tide pull
to feel
the tender edge
of comfort
and bathe in
its ebb and flow
standing in
the darkness alone
I saw
a silver show
in the silent
time of dark
dangling lines
of shadows
covered a beach
in shine
I was
touched by
the dance
of shimmering
light

"i am out of estrogen and i have a gun"

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-01-2003 03:37 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-07-01 03:21 PM

very beautiful Helen...one for me to keep..

hugs
M

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

2 posted 2003-07-01 03:28 PM

Everybody writes about the moon but not everybody can do it like this.
Nice stuff!

s.a.g.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-07-01 03:30 PM

I saw
a silver show
in the silent
time of dark
dangling lines
of shadows
covered a beach
in shine

Helen, this is beautiful. I lovve poems about the beach and the moon. This is a keeper for me, too.

Hugs

Ethel

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-07-01 03:41 PM

beautiful image

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-07-01 06:09 PM

Helen, this made me want to go walk the
beach on a moonlit night...for the second
time, your poem was my first. Enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-01 06:11 PM

alright! I'm outta here...TO THE BEACH!

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

7 posted 2003-07-01 06:11 PM

perfect!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2003-07-01 07:38 PM

me to, off to the beach....great write, thank you for sharing.

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