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Rebel without the Claws
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Rebel without the Claws |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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i am untainted.......... watered down paint, spaghetti without sauce, white on white, neutral and bland whole milk, a low salt diet, the dead sea siphoned, i spin squeaky clean in laundry cycles ride the graffiti free A train i write on teachers chalkboard 500 X i will be good i will be good i will not say that again i am a sanitized poet dripping with generic whitewash, i am a posterchild for the reformed i am a bore without a cause a rebel without her claws zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hold the applause........... [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-28-2003 08:53 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Like that's gonna' happen any time soon..... Is fun poem, though...welcome back! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ahhh I have missed you here . . . Poster child for the reformed huh? Awesome write Michele I adore how this drips off the page (get your claws back - you may need them) xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kids, i have to catch up on the reading here too in a few......kind of vacationed out right now |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
welcome back. I missed you, that was absolutely hillarious. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good write,,, i enjoyed it much... A voice of honesty |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A poster child without the applause~ Oh how I adore your spunk~ Stand up and let me take a look at you mama~ Michele, you are one in a million!!! |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
Great Job! Everyone hits a rut in their life at some point in time, and you hit the nail on the head!  |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great title, great poem. Jason |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Cute....like the picture |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Woman! You are one of a kind... Have you been gone again?...I do usually keep up with you, and had been enjoying having you back...hope this was a self imposed day off, not to soon be seen again. We do miss you, with or without the claws... (Pssst...Just be who you are...the best there could be) TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
wind, q....thanks for stopping in bluesgirl......spunky, is me flames, jason.....thanks glad to please bboy......just liked??????????????? thanks dixiecup tdiamond, thanks for the nice thoughts.. just trying to tow the line somewhat........ want to stick around a while |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
this was soooo awesome I absolutely loved it You dont need claws You are a lady - its in the eyes Ohhh you mean in your poetry - lol yeah - I miss yer claws you are full of moxie as is your poetry I'll be watching for more as always - lol - |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
dreamboat........this is nada for me.......im watering down to stay here read some old stuff you will see moxie extreme..its the brooklyn in me ooh to be me again............. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, this one is a  !!!I LOVED it! Big hugs & big smiles! Linda P.S. Ratleader's line cracked me up!--and he was right on the money with it!  |
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