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I tried..... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 My heart cannot conquer cannot divide only uncover let you discover never hide slowly... confide tell truth where others have lied give comfort they cannot provide offer love you’ve been denied and if I fail to give all I hold inside baby sweet baby always know I tried..... ~SEA~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Sea...I feel that hurt. I sure do hope the intended sees this.  Hugs to you  Ethel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh man!!!!!!!!!!!!  color this moth green!!! IWIHWT!!!!    [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (07-01-2003 10:44 AM).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ethel, thank you for that, it wasn't meant sad though  Janet, very cool, thank you! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Aw....To have someone so understanding what a blessing. Love the art work also.Beautiful Bon-Bon |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice....thanks.... Goldenrose. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Heart confession with loving expression , and this was excellently expressed ,yes we can only do our best Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA Right on the money. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan,  This is so hot! And ditto whatever it was that Janet Marie said.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn girl, your muse is on fire! I love this, you keep getting better and better. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL@Larry ... that stands for: I WISH I HAD WROTE THIS!!!!! and boy do I wish I had. very cool write Sea-girlie.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
good write - very much enjoyed! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
SEA, This is awesome...but not only does he need to know you tried, but you need to know that in your heart. I am just thinking about my situations in relationships. Wondering why something doesn't work out...but I have to know I tried. I mean really know it. Loved this one, SEA. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan! Loved the pic as well. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
splendid resplendent ~o~ tell truth where others have lied ~o~ regards sudhir |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Very good poem. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I haven't read you in awhile! What a lovely piece of writing to come back to Hugs, Tara |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SEA - this is a wonderful piece. Love the pic as well. gee whiz it is good to read your work again!! hugs, Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
EXQUISITE! Simply exquisite Sea. |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
A beautiful and heart felt write! Great job!  ~*Summer*~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Poignant.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I'm fairly sure you didn't write it the way I read it, but... after reading it through once- I read it aloud as a rap-- sounded pretty good even with my sorry singing voice--lol very nice poem SEA JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan: OMG OMG this is it! every thing I have ever tried to write I swear to you lies here in perfection amazing xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
dang, but I wish I could write like that! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I loved this, but that's not unusual, since you wrote it... Pepper |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"and if I fail to give all I hold inside baby sweet baby always know I tried....." I believe that completely. Why? Because you're one of the most honest people I know and love.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, I'm with JM, IWIHWT. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww... thanks so much you guys and Michael you are my bestest friend!! I love you too.  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Urgh I'm crying...I'm being such a girl...just touching..makes me I dunno *goes away* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you are allways so sweet and romantic with your pictures and tales of loneliness. I love it, I read it earlier, but couldn't think off anything to say I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
SEA, sometimes we give our best, and that's all we have to give....I think the rest of it is up to God....and I think you did your best. Just beautiful, but with a sadness and resignation that I know well....  ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
exquisite penned...Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Susan, this is sooooooo beautifully compassionate, sweet friend, you did all you could for you have a golden heart, it's just sometimes people are reluctant to ask for help and it's all too much to help them! (sad sigh) This is well-written, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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