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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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It comes with a rush the feeling I have been here before - done this before and the memories in flood wash away my dreams like so much bilge caught the backwater of remember. My head hurts with the speed of the flow; a torrent of emotions all cascading in as if the waterfall of life has finally caught up and tipped me once more over the edge into the stream. Shaking with anxiety and trembling I drip bitter salted tears into the wound of the past not yet healed and remember- I look closely at gap between then and now, see it is not the same and yet and yet - the memory comes with a rush. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Awesome write my friend, sometimes its scary to feel the familiar emotions that your words conjure up! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the memory comes with a rush... Oh Wonderful... Hi Kethry  regards sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love the imagery in this fine write by you Lynne dear. might be in Melbourne again soon  Maree. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KethryDearFriend~ 'as if the waterfall of life has finally caught up and tipped me once more over the edge into the stream.' My, my ... you tumbled me in your cascading thoughts~ Love to you Hooley-Dooley gal~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Shaking with anxiety and trembling I drip bitter salted tears into the wound of the past not yet healed and remember- I look closely at gap between then and now, see it is not the same and yet and yet - the memory comes with a rush. It takes more than time stretching between then and now to remove power from those memories. Excellent write, my friend. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can say I know this well...great write here Kethry |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
ah destiny...predetermination between the lines...interesting write, enjoyed as always  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sounds like a rough one, I don't like that feeling that I've got no control. Scary. But well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Cascade Cascading Flowing A waterfall Sparkling Shedding drops A rainbow of Colour Splishing Splashing Tinkling Musical A sound Like laughter Babbling Calling As it falls In a stream Of delight Rain, soft As cobwebs Touching the Ground in a Benediction A blessing A delight Water That breath Of life That drink That none May live Without Much like Your words Which fall on My soul Breathing life Into my heart You are the water That brings life To this page You are The blessing That brings joy To these eyes Marsha Beloved one I wouldn't necessary say it was a worthy response but it is a response. Love you always and forever Slushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kethry: Brava Bella a wonderful write! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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