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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-07-01 07:22 AM


Touch and Taste

Remember when you first tasted new food
and almost right away you could tell whether
you liked it or not.
So you might find yourself thinking or saying,
"Hey, this is good.  I believe I'd like some
more of this."  Or you might say "yuk", and
that would be the end of that.
Well, I'm thinking that when you meet a new
woman you kind of go through the same motions,
and I can imagine that women do the same.
So the first time I hold her hand or touch
her or kiss her, I find myself thinking
thoughts like "She feels good, or perhaps she
feels cold, or she's greatly increasing my
heartbeat, or she not doing much of anything
for me."
And perhaps the relationship is assured or doomed
from that first touch, that first assessment,
or by the first few words that you find escaping
from your mouth.  What will those first few words
be, "Yum or yuk."

JamesLee
July01
2003



[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (07-01-2003 07:27 AM).]

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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2003-07-01 07:34 AM


james you give thoughts to ponder on!

You have a way of making us question life in your poetry!


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-07-01 01:26 PM


Think you Romantic Heart...I was wondering why some food taste so good and some is a total turn off and I was wondering why some women feel so good when you touch them and others do nothing for me...James
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3 posted 2003-07-01 01:49 PM


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