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IntoTheFlames
Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

0 posted 2003-06-30 05:50 PM

Gaze into the lake,
Look into its cool depths,
And search for the fate,
That has brought you to such lengths.

You can not leave until you have found
The answer,
Wait patiently in wonder,
For what can sometimes be forever,
Can actually be never.

Rooted to your spot,
A choice of precision,
Remember you cast the lot,
It was your decision.

To the beating waves,
You are now a slave.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-30 05:51 PM

terrific write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2003-06-30 06:08 PM

"To the beating waves,
You are now a slave."

Great lines those! Welcome to PIP!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-06-30 06:27 PM

To the beating waves,
You are now a slave.

we are all, i guess
ponderful words

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2003-06-30 11:37 PM

I liked this very much

welcome!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-07-01 12:53 PM

WELCOME! and I must say, I'm glad the decision you made was favorable to joining Passions in Poetry.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-07-01 07:55 AM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry - This is a wonderful entree to our forums. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work - Do settle in and make yourself comfortable among us... and check your email for a special greeting...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2003-07-01 08:36 AM

To the beating waves,
You are now a slave
While you wait on the shore
and dream of much more.

Welcome and good write. I look forward to seeing more of your work
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

8 posted 2003-07-01 08:42 AM

Welcome to Passions.I know you will like it here.Feel free to post your poems with the assurance that any comments will be nurturing.Please contact me if you require any assistance.Now write and enjoy.

paladin

....a knight without armor

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-07-01 01:47 PM

Welcome to Passions!

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