Open Poetry #27 |
DTB… |
bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
DTB… I cut out my heart,that wasn’t enough, Plunged my soul through a garbage disposal. Still far from dead,trash compacted my head, Hoping yet you’d accept my proposal. You said that was cool,but you required more, Then dumped me for a three headed weenie. Awoke in a sweat,dropped the key by the desk, Visions of you in a duct tape bikini. Live like it's your last day... Dance like nobody's watching... Love like you've never been hurt... [This message has been edited by bbent (07-01-2003 05:50 AM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
OUCH!!! Must hurt like you know what to take off your bikini!!!! Very interesting write, BB, and left me with some unique images, I must say!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
lol this one was great |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wanna talk about it? probably not I'll be moving downtown in a couple of weeks, but will keep my current email addy and may be online only every other day for now hope all is ok Ray! [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-01-2003 11:08 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Thank's y'all...just stretching a bit trying to fire up a bored muse.appreciate you reading and replying as well as tolorating my bent sense of humor. Live like it's your last day... |
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