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What Dreams May Come
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What Dreams May Come |
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Cruina Junior Member
since 2003-07-01
Posts 16Virginia |
What dreams may come to us In those wee hours of the night When we turn and toss and topple from Thought to thought Like feathers lost in a wind? If the body is an illusion Why do we eat sleep cry curse and breathe? Why does my sub-conscience Send subliminal messages And use suggestive sales To try to win me over? What dreams do we wind around our fingers Like spools of thread? What plans are we weaving, if any? I wake with words on my tongue like Babies waiting to be born. Why do I abort my thoughts? Why do I remain silent when there is a garden of Monologues Growing in the pit of my stomach? Why doesn’t anyone pick my flowers? March 16, 2003 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
questions. questions...sigh good write, I can relate |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Cruina, Welcome to Passions! I love your first post.. especially these lines.... I wake with words on my tongue like Babies waiting to be born. Why do I abort my thoughts? Why do I remain silent when there is a garden of Monologues Growing in the pit of my stomach? Why doesn’t anyone pick my flowers? Love the images. please check your email for a special greeting. Maree  fate is not just |
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Cruina Junior Member
since 2003-07-01
Posts 16Virginia |
Thank you, Maree... |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderfully introspective piece, and a great entree to our Passionate walls. Welcome to Passions in Poetry - Settle in and make yourself comfy...  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wonderful images in the words. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
"To sleep,perchance to dream".Welcome to Passions.Enjoyed your poem.I am looking for more from you. paladin |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
They will...James |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
 What a great addition you are to PIP!! I enjoyed your first post very much. I'll most definitely be searching For more of your wonderful work! Welcome to PIP, once again!!  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome To Passions! Dreams are sometimes realities!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful beginning post, Cruina! Welcome to Passions.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Cruina - nicely written, and I can relate... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions !! Enjoyed your first post. Have fun here. Chris ~ "Said you'd give me light... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Cruina...Very nicely written. Speaks volumes to this heart of mine. ***Ivy Rose |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Corie Your words portrayed many amazing images and I really enjoyed the read. Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your time amongst many warm and friendly people who will welcome you with open arms. "Happiness is something that comes into our lives through doors we don't even remember leaving open" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed welcome to passions |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
Excelent job!!! Dreams are really confusing things!!! I hope to see more of your work soon!  ~*Summer*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Corie, this is a very heartfelt debut, dearest friend, it can be a little frustrating when such good thoughts slip away, yet I think they are always compensated for something just as valuable and in following our intuition, so much is always there for us, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Corie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
well written, well said. Enjoyed every word. Sunkissed. |
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