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Without Question
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Without Question |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I have laid beside you in the sun sharing the same umbrella. I have skipped through puddles in the falling rain while trying my best to keep up with you. I have felt your hands on my face letting my tears fall in front of you laying my head on your shoulder feeling content, without saying a word. You spoke them with your eyes listening quietly to mine. I have known your touch reaching deeply into the private places of my heart. I have been lost in your arms never wanting to let go curling my fingers in your hair trailing kisses down your spine. I have watched you watching me gathering up my joy. Because of you I have stayed a little longer even when I doubted you. I can try to save myself from myself but I can hardly expect you to. I have acted carelessly on ocassion letting my imagination get away from me. You are my favorite, and the only subject of my love letters and every word I've tried to explain, sometimes getting too soft and far worse. But the fact remains, I'll never stop believing in you. And if I were granted one wish it would be, that you know I always will. ~Without Question~ ~*~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow! Such imagery and emotion! Enjoyed  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Without Question" those were very moving words of love...  Love & Light, Linda |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very good...Very! Brava, Bluesy! And still you continue to grow as a writer. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
 Sometimes we only need to beleive! It can make all the difference! Wonderful Write Blues |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'll never stop believing in you. That's a powerful promise... and written beautifully. *S* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
WOW, put this one in a safe place...and save it, it is a treasure of a write. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
But the fact remains, I'll never stop believing in you. And if I were granted one wish it would be, that you know I always will. ~Without Question~ you know you do, and you want someone to know it too, and you give up a wish in the name of love, how romantic.......... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Lori..this is breathtakingly beautiful! So many lines in here I have tried to say to a certain someone.. Lovely...simply lovely. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bluesygirl...this is going directly into my library. Just beautiful !! hugs, Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah forever the optimist I see? That is where you and I truly differ but so beautifully done nonetheless. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You are my favorite, and the only subject of my love letters and every word I've tried to explain, sometimes getting too soft and far worse." I liked this part best...I think...lol I liked the whole poem! When I see your name, I have to read.... you rock |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very deep and heartfelt... Done so well. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are all so good to me, and I thank you sincerely. What more can I say!!! Hugs and warm fluffy stuff~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bluesy, And "without question" you'll experience it all over again.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh goodness, Lori, you know that I know how this one feels......  I'm keeping this one, Lady. Hugs  Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
each verse is a memory to me..only my memory is failing *s a nice touch to your words, Lori hugs M |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lovely writing well expressed..thank you for the great write... Goldenrose. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
yes " without question " full of heartfelt emotion Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's very hard to not question, takes a very strong woman |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori---beautifully heart felt! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Because of you I have stayed a little longer..." It's all good; that line got me. Thank you for sharing this. |
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TasteOfOctober Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 94 |
I'm not even sure what to say..i love it...awesome, amzing, beautiful, deep, touching...im trying to think of a word, but none of them are good enoguh. i think this is seriously one of my favorite pieces i have ever read. thank you. The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for reading, one and all. I appreciate it so much...really I do. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oh my! so glad i found this. lori, this is everything i could ever wish to say. love ya gal. gem xxxxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
gemma, gemma~ Thanks, you. |
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