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wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-06-30 08:13 PM

Eve

It wasn't so much
the taste for fruit
as it was having
a taste
for taste

Nor, was it exactly
the flesh of the fruit
that compelled her
as much as it was
the fruit of the flesh

[This message has been edited by wranx (06-30-2003 08:14 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-06-30 08:24 PM

Oh My !!
Ummm...yes.

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2003-06-30 08:25 PM

wooohooooooo......indeed.....

Lauren~

Through the darkness
I can see your light
And you will always shine
And I can feel your heart in mine

I will remember you

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-06-30 10:44 PM

Adam would be so proud~
Dang wranx, this is pretty peachy!

Seriously~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-30 11:47 PM

Brilliant Ed brilliant

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-06-30 11:55 PM

Finally...a man that understands...
This was very well done Wranx. TD

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2003-07-01 12:00 PM

I'll second Aenimal's 'brilliant!'
Damn, this is good!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-07-01 12:04 PM

Delicious!

Huggums,
EA

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

8 posted 2003-07-01 12:29 PM

Another amazing write Ed.

Jason

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-07-01 12:32 PM

hmm, seems you've made an important discovery here, one that many never will understand

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

10 posted 2003-07-01 01:46 AM

smiling

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-07-01 04:10 AM

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2003-07-01 04:12 AM

Nor, was it exactly
the flesh of the fruit
that compelled her
as much as it was
the fruit of the flesh

YES!

love this Ed and keeping it.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Cruina
Junior Member

since 2003-07-01

Posts 16
Virginia

13 posted 2003-07-01 04:15 AM

very clever and witty. Thought provoking.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2003-07-01 09:45 AM

Needs to be back with Adam...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

15 posted 2003-07-01 09:48 AM

Oh my goodness well I am sure glad you got that computer of yours up and running again, I would miss the likes of this for sure!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

16 posted 2003-07-01 10:02 AM

nice work with adam and eve, Ed...

regards,
Sudhir

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