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Open Poetry #27

Calling Out

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-06-30 05:04 PM

~ Calling out ~

Im calling out
Without a sound
Touching your soul
With my love

Running through your mind
Whispering to you
Just hoping
Ill become apart
Of your feelings

I just can’t hide
As feelings ride
Creating emotions
Deep inside

You open your eyes
And I see
So much clearly
Than before

Slowly I drift back to myself
Knowing that
Only you can
Change your feelings

I sit and wait
All alone
Hoping you’ll come
And take me away

To the plains of love
Where we will stay
Till our time
Is done

Then we will float
To heavens above
And live with
Eternal love

[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (07-01-2003 04:08 AM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-30 05:13 PM

very good write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2003-07-01 03:51 AM

thanks for reading it

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2003-07-01 04:07 AM

This is very nice Lee

Maree.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-01 04:08 AM

oooooo, very romantic

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

5 posted 2003-07-01 09:37 AM

Aww how sweet! Is it for anyone special? Whoever it is they are very lucky. Great write. I`m gonna go check out that duet now.
*Allison*

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