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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I sing--you dance--we count the steps measuring my angled limb-- searching for the scheme of me within the distance of my grin-- as I were a baited pit strewn with fronds to hide the deep-- the emptiness of me a trap. I give you paint and bare my skin a canvas for your offering-- closing lids of coffin eyes Oh I sense your wariness as if I were a sacrifice nude upon the sun-baked stone-- let the blood of me release. Understand the offering I am not a thing unclean-- foreskin of capillary revealing that which Gods must own... not the dirt's humanity but river road directing home. See ye now and comprehend temptation is a starting block-- but hallowed are the mysteries and grace is naught but re-set clock-- allowances of "spin again." |
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beachbabe New Member
since 2003-06-28
Posts 8Klamath Falls, Oregon |
That was very beautiful!!  **~Nichol~*~* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, fantastic. Sandra |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Oh I sense your wariness as if I were a sacrifice nude upon the sun-baked stone-- let the blood of me release. i liked these lines they got my attention, as the whole write did, had to read it twice,  A voice of honesty |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, you are on a roll. Yeah, back to the beginning, spin again... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I give you paint and bare my skin a canvas for your offering-- closing lids of coffin eyes Oh I sense your wariness as if I were a sacrifice nude upon the sun-baked stone-- let the blood of me release." awesome awesome lines...wow...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and may you forever spin your yarns...  Warm hugs, EA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I got it!  And it was an awesome poem to boot-miss ya too. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
do we get to collect 200 dollars??? can I use my get-out-of-jail-free card?  wash my feet in the fire of Eden |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, gorgeous one....this is absolutely fantabulous. my fav lines.... I give you paint and bare my skin a canvas for your offering-- closing lids of coffin eyes Oh I sense your wariness as if I were a sacrifice nude upon the sun-baked stone-- let the blood of me release. adding to my llibrary Maree fate is not just |
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