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Half Asleep
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Half Asleep |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Half Asleep A pale glow lurks outside my bedroom windows, waiting to come in Is it the dawn that’s creeping through? Or is the moon still trekking its circular path above my roof? Shall I wrap up my lingering visions of the night with a sweetly chosen ending? Or roll back into the dream and allow the night to possess my body for a few more hours? Whether my eyes are half open or half closed would depend on the hour For I have been dwelling in the far reaches of the mind where there is no time and am resurfacing in the rectangular glow of either sun or moon A sudden incessant warble from a crab apple limb puts things in perspective It would matter not which star has caught my waking eye It is in these undefined moments that my pen is most prolific, and so half slumbering thoughts are leaking from my pen A new day has begun Elizabeth Santos |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A new day has begun Oh, yes...it has indeed.  It's good to see you here, too, sweet Lady. As always, I love your poetry. Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Good morning my dear.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It is in these undefined moments that my pen is most prolific, and so half slumbering thoughts are leaking from my pen And we are grateful. *S* I like this very much, Elizabeth. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...nice write |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"It is in these undefined moments that my pen is most prolific."---And may you continue to have such moments!  Lovely. Lovin' hugs, Your Fan, EA |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is absolutely lovvely Elizabeth.... I have missed reading you. Maree  fate is not just |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
And well begun, too. I like the feel of this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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