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BlueEyedGirl
New Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 6
New Jersey

0 posted 2003-06-13 07:46 AM

Soul Mate

Awaken my love
and behold....
The day has arrived
for our spirits
to meet again...
The day we have longed for.
Before time existed...
Before words were spoken...
As an unborn child anxiously awaiting
Birth
Our hearts have beat apart for too long.
I would see you
were I blind...
...Alas, I choose to see no other.
I live in the subconcious of your heart.
You have always been aware of my presence
And I of yours.
Our souls yearn.
Faceless becomes familiar
We are one.

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

1 posted 2003-06-13 07:50 AM

an ode to soulmates... this poem definately hit the spot fo sho.... one day i hope to find my true soulmate... very nyce read...keep it up

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-06-13 08:55 AM

Good write. I enjoyed reading this...

And welcome to Passions In Poetry!

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

idleeyes86
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 64
Somewhere over the rainbow

3 posted 2003-06-13 09:05 AM

Being a chronic pessimist and who is especially cynical when it comes to the subject of love and soul mates, I keep trying to condescend this in a way I usually would with poems such as this. However everytime I read it this nasty little sentimental side keeps popping up and no matter how much I push it back it keeps coming back so I guess the poem must be good lol.

Everybody hurts, take comfort in your friends, cos everybody hurts sometimes

(r.e.m)

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2003-06-13 09:30 AM

Welcome to Passions! This is a very nice write. I was going to highlight my favorite verse, but as I read it over and over, I just couldn't dissect it anymore. Overall, the message you send says the soulmates' love spans all of time. I'm putting this in my library.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-06-13 09:33 AM

...Alas, I choose to see no other.
I live in the subconcious of your heart.
You have always been aware of my presence
And I of yours.
Our souls yearn.
Faceless becomes familiar
We are one.

This is a very beautiful poem. I agree toatally that we do have soulmates. I'm so thankful that I finally found mine.