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Sidewalk Shuffle Thru the Puddle, Past the Plastic Bag
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Sidewalk Shuffle Thru the Puddle, Past the Plastic Bag |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 
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[ { \ \ - ~*~ - ~*~ - ~*~ - ~*~ - ~*~ - / / } ] darkened windows seen by the wet, moving city passing umbrellas shuffle by on sneakers and pavement wrappers swirl in the trash breezes of beauty while dumpsters desire the scuffling soul of Humanity [ { \ \ - ~*~ - ~*~ - ~*~ - ~*~ - ~*~ - / / } ] www.heybroproductions.com |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow, exellent writing!  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
while dumpsters desire the scuffling soul of Humanity .... great stuff.. what a wrestling thought... most enjoyed regards sudhir |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Spanx, guys.  peace. www.heybroproductions.com |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Enjoyed much, especially the ending. Nicely done. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Neat sweep to your words AniKay~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
these observations of yours so excellently put to verse.. If Daniel Martin should come out from under his rock to read it, he will appreciate it, too... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
so much truth. Great write I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Thanks so much, people. Much love all, ~Chrissy www.heybroproductions.com |
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