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"Inertia" with brian sites ( "dream duet" ?)
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"Inertia" with brian sites ( "dream duet" ?) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Outside the wind moves Somewhere inside I am moved to move fast a cold blur Plodding an ill-plotted course I found respite in this blanket toward a dimly defined destination now it is all I know knowing that to stop is to die I will never leave it's drowsy song So helpless before the hounds that drive me on I could move --- but it is easier to wrap this dream around me the very idea of stopping is as absurd and breathe shallow as refusing to breathe of it's stale gray air [This message has been edited by wranx (06-30-2003 12:43 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed and Brian: Goodness at last . . . the meeting of minds . . . or souls may I say? Displayed before me I see one man seperated by a push and pull of fate I see two men incorporated into one soul I see questions, fears, limitations and strength which incorporate every one of us. I see beauty . . . Applauding here and smiling at this beautiful present left before my eyes xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! what a team! I was waiting for you two to do one! Worth the wait! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Dynamic duo! holy batcrap, batman! Jason |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Outside the wind moves Somewhere inside I am moved to move ***WOW! that opening just grabbed me completely!*** dynamic duet BRAVO! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Bravo!!! I think you make a great writing team!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 Bravo!!! and I'm assuming you both surived the process, too? inertia, indeed! ha. This is creationism. Aleph-Bayt. Active-Receptive. Blips on the screen. And it is universally applicable to any given situation. I'll probably have more to say after m'coffee too. I love this, and it's about time--it's a treat to see my two favorite men together. *wicked winks*  back after coffee.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes. Very much, a "dream" duet.... me smiling... me happy... and tickled purple! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
A dream duet indeed, two more of my favourites. Great work guys hope no microwaves were harmed in the process..nm |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
A poem with many shades of grey: my favorite color in fact. Beautiful, and somehow broken. Ok, is that strange? I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thanks all Another one born of a boring night at work. An unfair advantage when it comes to a collaboration, eh? And actually, this was painless And Sunshine? happy that you're pleased. It was your idea, after all. [This message has been edited by wranx (06-30-2003 11:47 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hey guys...really enjoyed this pairing. Your styles work well together. Ed's unique phrasing and Brian's styling blend perfectly. Do hope to read more from you two!  |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Indeed a dream duet, well done both of you. and Ed, i'm looking forward to our dream duet  Maree |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Since it was painless... perhaps you could do more? suthern's greedy. LOL And this is excellent! *S* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is fantastic...what a blend of style! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...still smiling...  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hey Brian! DUDE! You better get over here and take half the blame for this! I'm not kiddin'! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
WHAT?! WHAT?! oh....yes sorry Ed.. left you holding this steaming bag all by your lonesome... thank you everybody.... this was made painless by Ed's masterweaving not quite decoupage but it'll work oh and cool.... a way to thank people and bump my own stuff yeehaaaa! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I found respite in this blanket toward a dimly defined destination now it is all I know knowing that to stop is to die aaaargh. i nearly missed this. i'm never going on holiday again. two of my fave poets, this is exceptional. there arent words for it.  into my library. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
wow, exelent. How is that spelled anyway? I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderfully done... M |
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