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Blood Brothers |
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TasteOfOctober Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 94 |
hey guys, last one for a while, i promise. hope you like it. Blood Brothers I lit my ciggerette but the smoke had cleared, the fog had lifted and he knew my fear. His heart was full but plauged by pain, he was my hero with my blood in his veins. I lit my ciggerette but the smoke had cleared, he was my hero until he disappeared. I walk alone haunted by the day that is done, he had said I'd be the only one left, and I am alone. I walk far to find what was home, but my shoes are **** and my feet are sore. I open my pack, **** , I've only got one more. I lit my ciggerette but the smoke had cleared, plauged by the memory of what was once my fear. Plagued by the memory of the day we both knew would come, plauged by the memory of the day that is done. My smokes are gone lety this dream fade, but he had said I'd be the only one left to remember. So he is gone and all my dreams fade, left alone with his blood in my viens. I won't forget, I won;t overcome, I will remember, I am the only one, blood brothers done. The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
this is powerful, I like it  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad, powerful |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
good write - keep them coming please! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the write,,, very good... A voice of honesty |
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