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Of dreams |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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When direction is lost and I take a wrong turn I’m perturbed to awake and find I’m at home but then I remember in dreams how I yearn and how they entice the lonely to roam. There are days when I linger half comatose and days that I live in disbelief, fear, but then I remember the book isn’t closed though fragile and old in this atmosphere. And so of my dreams they’re completely intact for love’s energy must refuse solitude in its need to honour and respect spirit pacts made always to still human inquietude. But how restless are we like jitterbugs, fleas, in the shadow of all we’re not meant to be! Helen |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write n read Helen... A voice of honesty |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you QjQ for reading and commenting. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When direction is lost and I take a wrong turn I’m perturbed to awake and find I’m at home but then I remember in dreams how I yearn and how they entice the lonely to roam. Liked this even more the second time around! I enjoy the depth of your work, and the way you process your thoughts. I'll tune in next Sunday, for the love of your story.  Many hugs Helen~ |
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TasteOfOctober Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 94 |
wonderful...I love the way you look at dreamsin this poem. The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
last lines topped it off nicely |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
To be read twice is an honour, dear Bluesy! Oh, and now the pressure for Sunday - I'd better sleep all week! Taste of October - Thanks for the read and for commenting. Passing Shadows - Yes, we are all restless but if not for that restlessness we may perhaps not reach our true potential in life so it's not necessarily a bad thing. Thanks for reading. |
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