Open Poetry #27 |
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Her Song of Truth |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri ![]() |
Her Song of Truth Without pretense, pomp and circumstance At last, at home with herself. Comfortable as Worn fuzzy fur slippers or old ragged pair of blue jeans She sits easy, cross-legged on bare wooden floor Singing soulful solo heavy-heart ballads This night, Her heart’s melody sweetly released by acceptance found in empathetic eyes. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Acceptance in compassionate eyes can be the key to a lifetime... Well done, Patricia! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
She sits easy, cross-legged on bare wooden floor yes, this is me ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Her Song of Truth sounds similar to one that I sing to myself at times. Well done, Precious Patricia! ![]() Linda |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent write, the mood so evident throughout from the images given, and the ending falling right in place along with the rest of the poem... Ya dun good Patricia... Yepper! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
just wondefull,, a gal in old blu-jeans very nice write... A voice of honesty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Patricia - I loved this image *nodding to self* awesome writing xxoo |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Singing soulful solo heavy-heart ballads" ahhha yes... ![]() you write wonderfully ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This fell upon the page quite sweetly my friend. Nice write. TD |
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