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Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

0 posted 2003-06-29 09:30 PM

Her Song of Truth

Without pretense,
pomp and circumstance

At last, at home with herself.

Comfortable as

Worn fuzzy fur slippers
or old ragged pair of blue jeans

She sits easy,
cross-legged on
bare wooden floor

Singing soulful solo
heavy-heart ballads

This night,

Her heart’s melody
sweetly released
by acceptance found in
empathetic eyes.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-06-29 09:32 PM

Acceptance in
compassionate eyes
can be the key
to a lifetime...

Well done, Patricia!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-06-29 09:41 PM

She sits easy,
cross-legged on
bare wooden floor

yes, this is me

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-06-29 09:48 PM

Her Song of Truth sounds similar to one that I sing to myself at times.

Well done, Precious Patricia!

Linda

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-06-29 09:54 PM

Excellent write,  the mood so evident
throughout from the images given,  and
the ending falling right in place along
with the rest of the poem...

Ya dun good Patricia...  Yepper!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-06-29 10:06 PM

Enjoyed...James

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-06-29 10:11 PM

just wondefull,, a gal in old blu-jeans

very nice write...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-29 10:12 PM

just beautiful!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-06-30 07:34 PM

Patricia - I loved this image
*nodding to self*
awesome writing
xxoo

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2003-06-30 11:35 PM

"Singing soulful solo
heavy-heart ballads"

ahhha yes...

you write wonderfully

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2003-07-01 12:03 PM

This fell upon the page quite sweetly my friend. Nice write. TD

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