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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2003-06-13 12:02 PM


Thirteen


They say numbers have meaning when woven
together with the letters of a name
binding one with another

perhaps.

Sharing the fullness of the moon
is nothing quite mystical

nor is sharing a birthday
not really

no

unless it falls on the thirteenth.

Though

there is an urgency on this Friday
they call
black

where the angel of darkness
travels backward in search of her serenity
her sorceress on fire
her vibration

fading away

slowly from her universe.

© Copyright 2003 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-06-13 12:04 PM


Awesome poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Martie
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2 posted 2003-06-13 12:06 PM


Happy Birthday, Maree!  You share it with another awesome poet...both of you are treasures to me in word and friendship.  Loved the poem!  
Jason Lyle
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3 posted 2003-06-13 12:07 PM


Happy birthday ladies!

Jason

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-06-13 12:18 PM


speechless and smiling

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2003-06-13 12:23 PM


"where the angel of darkness
travels backward in search of her serenity
her sorceress on fire
her vibration

fading away

slowly from her universe."

Hmmmm. Yanno, that's purty sexy!

<--that one is for you.

<--that one is for me.

<--this one is for Raph!

Luscious and lovely Maree, I was just remembering earlier how you and I became friends, over this--our shared birthday. Even if it means nothing in the grand scheme of things, it certainly means something to me--as it's also the birthdate of a wonderful friendship.

Love you much! Thank you...

Ratleader
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6 posted 2003-06-13 12:23 PM


....ahem...I have it on the best authority that angels do not age.....birthdays are allowed, but just for fun, because years are not a factor.....

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garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-06-13 12:24 PM


Happy Birthday, Maree......

and to Karen, too....

Heart hugs to you both
           
Ethel

apoetdreams
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8 posted 2003-06-13 12:27 PM


Very nice, touching poem.....  

Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-06-13 03:36 AM


wonderful work! Happy Birthday to you two!
Janet Marie
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10 posted 2003-06-13 08:20 AM


How fitting that 2 of Poetry Lands most gifted poets also share the same birthday...

me thinks its poetic justice

and..its down right Gemini Groovy


Beautiful poem Maree...

Happy B-day to both of me girlie-girls  

gemjop
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11 posted 2003-06-13 08:30 AM







to two of the most stunning writers, and lovely gals.

    

i'll have a few for you.

much love, gem
xxxxxxxxxx

[This message has been edited by gemjop (06-13-2003 08:31 AM).]

Enchantress
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12 posted 2003-06-13 08:58 AM


Wonderful piece here Maree!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...
AND...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO SERENITY!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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13 posted 2003-06-13 09:02 AM



What a present...not just for Serenity...
but for all of us.

Happy Birthday O Serene One...

and Happy Birthday, our littlest dark angel...

Nan
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14 posted 2003-06-13 09:13 AM


This is wonderful, Maree

...A glorious birthday to both...

nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2003-06-13 09:14 AM


A beautiful poem,

Happy Birthday to you both.

hugss and best wishes
M

Susan Caldwell
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16 posted 2003-06-13 10:02 AM


Happy Birthday to Both of you!!! My auntie used to say that all good people are born in June...I couldn't agree more!!!

Susan

SmartChick
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17 posted 2003-06-13 10:16 AM


Happy Birthday to you! And Karen, too.
Dark Angel
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18 posted 2003-06-13 10:49 AM


the_loner_23 thank you so much for the awesome.

Martie..thank you dear lady, and yes I do share it with an awesome poet I'm so very lucky.

Jason.. thank you!

Sir Raph, c'mon you speechless? glad to have made you smile dear

Karen how are you Sis? Hope you're having a wonderful day.
"purty sexy" ey? well that depends on how you look at it and I know how you're looking at it m'dear
Yes I remember..seems like yesterday...it means very much to me Karen and yes the birthdate of our wondermous friendship indeed indeed. Love you.

Hi there Ed, you're right.. years are not a factor and I can prove it heh. Thanks for stopping by.

Ethel, hi thanks for the Happy Birthday and hugs

apoetdreams...yes a poet indead does.. thank you.

PS thank you so much.

JM, you've made me smile BIG TIME thank you so much.

gemjop such a lovely thing to say..thank you

Enchantress,thank you so much.

Hi Sunshinygirl thank you honey love you.

Hi Nan thank you for the wonderful and your best wishes.

Nakdthoughts, thank you so very much.

Susan, your Auntie is right hehe thank you so much.

Smartchick thank you!


Earth Angel
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19 posted 2003-06-13 10:51 AM


Happy birthday to two fine poetesses!

Maree, this poem is remarkable!

Birthday hugs for you both!
EA

littlewing
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20 posted 2003-06-14 10:06 PM


Maree - this is amazing but would
expect nothing less from you

late again - I know . . .

stunning writing for two extremely
gifted women
xxoo

Ratleader
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21 posted 2003-06-15 07:24 AM


....a PS and a bounce because it's good...

I want more of you, dang it! Don't be waitin' for another birthday before you give us another one.....please?

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Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-02-02 02:34 PM


HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!

                    

        


ARCTIC WIND

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