Open Poetry #27 |
Your Touch |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
The way you caress my skin And hold me tightly to Your body The way you passionately Kiss my lips Over and over again Your hugs are as if A bear were hugging me And never wanted to let go Your fingers trace my face As you look deeply into my eyes And say "I love you." Your touch Is all I crave Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Definitely suits us Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Loner.....loner....somehow that handle doesn't seem to fit just now..... But it's the writing that raises the temperature in here...very nice... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Canon_D_111 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 58New York USA |
to know this touch once again...romance. poetry...love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, loner... the love just shines through every line. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sensuality...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very loveing thoughts written,,, QjQ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely thoughts Julie...keep them coming M |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Julie...this has to be one of your most lovely writes. Beautifully penned. Hugs, ~Vicky "it is better to be a part of beauty |
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