Open Poetry #27 |
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Never Forget |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon ![]() |
take the feelings you had the love that showered the love that made you safe you're always okay don't think it's ever going to leave there will always be this, this unforgotten this unchangeable this rearangeable situation now it's time to redirect reflect hesitate only to continue what you once felt the drive, the passion only now for a different reason don't fear it embrace the power the after affects of love the positive remembering don't go back just reminisce it's okay just never forget [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-28-2003 05:56 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this unforgotten this unchangeable this rearangeable situation God this sounds familiar . . . wish it didnt for the both of us amazing writing Talia xxoo |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
great writing, a complex mind of emotions you are Talia. Thanks for the words. Goldenrose. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I like the 'never forget' philosophy of this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like it~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"the after affects of love the positive remembering"...beautiful. I dig your new picture, too, by the way. ;-) |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
"don't fear it embrace the power the after affects of love the positive remembering don't go back just reminisce it's okay just never forget" sounds familiar to me too ... i like the ending...strong i won't forget ![]() thanks for sharing this, i'm glad i read it ![]() *kelly* |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
Thank you all, I really liked this (for my own work that is) hehe. Thanks Kahlil. The new pic is waaaaay better, I thought the old one made me look frumpy...and yes goldenrose, my poems are this jumbled mess of words(and emotions)..until you get to the end,then at that point it all makes sense, well at least I hope it does..thanks again everyone for commenting,it still means a lot ![]() ![]() |
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