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Open Poetry #27

To be the Echo

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-28 02:27 AM

I play a melody, over in my head.
I aspire to be the one who
aquires
the one perfect word that
compliments,
describes
everything..

For what eloquence do we view in
chaos without love?
We must have ravens
if we're to have doves.
I've given you merely
an extension of what I
can be..
For I'd see no point in flowers,
if there were no weeds.

And poison, I
hear the pistol breathing from
underneath my bed.
A gleaming bit of moonlite reminds
me of where I place myself beyond..
what matters.
Peaceful sleep, violent object..
The melody repetitive in my head.

I aspire to be
the
echo.

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (06-28-2003 03:12 AM).]

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-06-28 02:30 AM

CaseyLeigh
Junior Member

since 2003-05-15

Posts 48

2 posted 2003-06-28 03:06 AM

typo on "view"...keyboards are no friend of mine either.

nice write

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

3 posted 2003-06-28 06:24 PM

nicely written, enjoyed.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-06-28 07:32 PM

Well done...
Interesting presentation...kept me spellbound
ThisDiamond

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

5 posted 2003-06-28 10:43 PM

This is very intersting. Enjoyed.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-06-28 11:03 PM

The melody repetitive in my head.

I aspire to be
the
echo.

yes, i do too, i liked this very much

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