Open Poetry #27 |
The Centre Of My Universe |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * I could try to sing a love song But such a talent I don't possess So I'll rely upon my words For my true love I now confess Before you came into my life Love remained far from view Now through nature I am reminded How much in love I am with you I see your beauty in the sea And feel your warmth in the breeze Your love sweeps me off my feet As it brings me to my knees You are the centre of my universe The east to my west You believe in who I am And know me better than the rest You taught my spirit how to fly As you brought out the best in me Your love makes me feel invincible The brightest future I now see * * * "Send love in all directions - North, South, East and West. Experience for several dazzling moments how it is to be at the very centre of the universe" I am in motion |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write and pic,, just terrific... QjQ |
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Canon_D_111 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 58New York USA |
I remember that place...how much bliss is there... you are lucky to have found it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sue, you never cease to amaze....so beautiful |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, feels like forever since I've read one of your stunning love poems. I love this and love 'that place.' Hugs my friend ... Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, this was a real treat for the heart--and eyes! Luvin' hugs, Linda |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Lovely! Enjoyed it very much. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
How lovely in every way...how I am glad I found you there amidst your Sunday morning. Wonderful verse, Sue. Patricia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very, very nice...James |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you write powerfully of love Sue - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and you truly can sing a love song too, for I believe using the voice you have is the most beautiful voice of all, and these would make the perfect lyrics! (kiss on cheek) This is stunning, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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