Open Poetry #27 |
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Shadow Moon Dreams |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Soft, the Moon comes breath of light breathing on the heart of my yearning. The shadowy silhouettes of blue stars linger yet in my dreams. Moon of delight speaking my name to the heart of one who dreams in silhouette like me. Shadows caressing the day of my moonlit passage. My heart singing out, Are you the forcasted one? Are you the moonglow that will shine within my soul? Soft, the Moon comes holding its breath at the sight of new love unfolding, at the radiance of Love's light stepping out of the shadow dreams of my night. |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"My heart singing out, Are you the forcasted one? Are you the moonglow that will shine within my soul?" Beautiful Ivy Rose I love it!! |
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TasteOfOctober Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 94 |
I love the way this flows and the vizualizations it breeds. The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the first and last stanzas are my favorites...oh but the pull this has on the heart ![]() ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I love any poems about shadows good write |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful. Are you the moonglow that will shine within my soul? Enjoyed. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy, Well done, enjoyed. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Hello Love that title. I'm a title person love to play with them.If you ever need help with a title come to me and I'll try to help. Beautiful Bonnie J aka Bon-Bon |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A lovely write...so much your signature TD |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A beautiful write and very enjoyable read! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beauty, as beautiful as a rose your words are! I love moonlight poems ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful flow...james |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Soft, the Moon comes holding its breath at the sight of new love unfolding, at the radiance of Love's light stepping out of the shadow dreams of my night. Ivy Rose, this is just the most beautiful thing. I absolutely love poems about love and the moon. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have a way with the moon, doncha!?! When I see Ivy Rose, I see a moon shining brightly upon us. Always a pleasurable read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ivy, absolutely beautiful! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - geez, and I almost missed this one. I love the moon and what it can do, and it can do much in the ways of romance... BC |
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