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Open Poetry #27
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Gavin
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since 2003-06-22
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0 posted 2003-06-28 01:03 AM

break together
and falter strong
stand fast against the motionless tide
as the earth pulls you along

breathe water into life
fly through empty caverns
come back inside this blinding dark corner
and grow another tavern

kick back and deconstruct
let humanity decay
for what's future without tommorow
what's tommorow without today
© Copyright 2003 Gavin - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2003-06-28 01:04 AM

"for what's future without tommorow
what's tommorow without today"

Great last line Gavin....Much Enjoyed
Gavin
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2 posted 2003-06-28 01:05 AM

thanks a lot
ecrivan
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3 posted 2003-06-28 01:18 AM

liked the last stanza especially..welcome to Passions


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