Open Poetry #27 |
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Privilege Revoked |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Privilege Revoked I reserved a place for you special space you cancelled now it’s gone withdrawn and out of reach "i am out of estrogen and i have a gun" |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Stay angry. It is more healthy than depression. Much strength in this sad poem. |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I can relate Lady! Wonderful write, much enjoyed! ![]() |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
good thing came back or would have missed this great write as always and yeah i'm with ice..angers more fun anyway |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good write...let the emotions flow...your poems are exceptionally brilliant...and if you don't mind...would love to read more. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I hope this isn't about me it would break my heart I am coming down one day soon, I sware! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yeppers, one I can relate to very well ![]() |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
his loss i'd say...you deserve so much more |
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