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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-06-27 09:07 PM

So simply seen,  this timid task of green ground gardeners
and busy brunette beauties upon the primitive porch posing.

For finery finds fine friends and frantic foes.  As green grass
grows gregariously and bees buzz busily upon the pollen
packed posies of a wispy white walk.

But, taking their time and watching water’s weave through
the dry dismal dirt, they realize rather rapidly that
a certain amount of water wisely washed the rough round
rocks from the glorious garden growing at the edge of the
high hedge holding lots of bees, birds and blooms.

And, after a considerable time of pondering, pausing and
picking....all was thought to be by the book bought and
arranged all around the white weaving walk precisely
per plan!

Sue (SEA)  you inspired me to do this....

Thanx....

Barry

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-27 09:09 PM

For finery finds fine friends and frantic foes

very good lines of poetry,,

enjoyed your read "mag"

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-06-27 09:11 PM

I saw the title, and laughed ...
my tongue is in knots now!!

I loved it, glad to have inspired in some way

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-06-27 09:17 PM

Wonderful write Barry...
By the time I got to the end...
my tongue was so twisted around my eye teeth
and I couldn't see to read the closing lines!
~Smiles & Hugs on a job well done!~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-06-27 09:20 PM

Thanx Glenn...just a little humor on a warm
but cooling night of word writing wit...

Sue. Take the tips of fine flexing fingers
and lighty let lips knead the knurly knot!

Laughing with ya...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-06-27 09:26 PM

might be a tongue twister, but the moral of the story is...the most mundane things in life, become miraculous perfection as if all pre-planned by destiny...very much enjoyed!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2003-06-27 09:38 PM

Nancy, around your eye teeth? Really now?

Trying to imagine that in my mind....hmmmm

LeeJ....thanx much, yes, quite an
appropriate moral of the story...

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