Open Poetry #27 |
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Bleed |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981![]() |
You weaken me, to the point where I'd split my veins and bleed- till there's nothing left. And yet you'd leave me in an instant- standing in the shadows. I hear thunder but where's the rain? you left me bleeding, the wound will never heal (not about me) I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And I thought I married Ebola. Are you quite sure you are not a bitter 47 year old divorcee'? *chuckle* I think we are going to get along just fine. I have to go do some housewifey stuff, but I'll drop you a line later tonight or tomorrow, k? |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I was afriad I wouldn't get response (I shoulda posted it in dark?) Thanks Ser, are you talking about the duet?I won't be here until tomorrow night, so you start it. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"You weaken me, to the point where I'd split my veins and bleed- till there's nothing left." WOW! I LOVE THAT! So powerful! ![]() |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Ah! i can always count on you for such moving poetry! yay for moving poetry!! lol great write ![]() |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thanks ![]() I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Great write, I liked it. ![]() |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
nah nevermind dark let it breathe up here, loved this |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Wow, i dont need another drink to love this,ok I'll have another drink.but I love this. Jason |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wind, I really enjoyed this. Your writing just keeps getting better and better. hugs, Chris ![]() "Said you'd give me light... |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
short, but powerful emotions expressed--i enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very powerful! love it! |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I appreciate you guys responding, this was perhaps a little too much for the openers to handle. I might migrate to dark #3... I'd probably fit in there better, but I have so many friends here. The only people I know in dark are LP and IndigoEve I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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