Open Poetry #27 |
Aurora Borealis |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Bulging authentic with attested furnished summer Wrapped in a natural cellophane this early evening chauffeur What strength of character…Aurora Borealis, Adopts the senses, streaming from finger’s crevasse Changing light within an infinite embossed theater Pouring a bon fire of accumulated double vows Interfacing structure, steering autonomy, explaining the how’s Overhead someone else views this buttery of flame Reflecting herbs of incidence like a high powered rifle’s aim From this, I take belief …direction primed with hunger Like a giant madron tree, their prayers stretching to high elders Recognizing the unseen as a level participate with enormous tribal eyes We drink our weight in design or human conscious shies Establishing contact with a super human ambassador Constantly smothered with a percentage of pay we can’t ignore Affinity smoothes to an elevated tone While this complexion of the sky spills triumphant drops ingrown We maintain a minimum wage from seasonal work Shaping identification of continents sumptuously perked Forging a religion from grains of the vast Vividly I remember the growing perfume of replenishment While in silence this specialized language stirs a soul’s mammoth sense Strange and exotic this love affair in the heavens Expanding energy, daydreaming insignia in substance Floral arrangement of mysterious principles, living cells and atoms Aurora Borealis..... Never have I viewed this, but...twould be astounding, I don't think any word could breath description....like love...those emmense all powerful feelings...filling every molecule of life, being a part of earth sea and wind, sky and life....like the Aurora Borealis....we are painted and leave our impression on time. By Lee J. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok.....I LOVE your poetry everything I've read so far, is so beautiful! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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You are intricate and intense...everything I've read from you is so intelligent, so calm and lucid. Even tho I haven't said so, I wanted you to know that I click on your posts every time I see them here. (Thought it was time to let you know that-- ) Enjoying seeing the world through your eyes. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just an amazing piece of work...I am in awe! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply beautiful !! Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! Lee, you have described beautifully what I always call my rainbow of dancing lights. It's what I missed most this winter after leaving Alaska. I spent many nights at the window, looking out in awe at these majestic bands of color dancing capriciously in winter's sky. I went outside and watched whenever the temp went above +10F. My first aurora experience was at +20F, then many times after that, I ventured out at subzero temps to catch the full impact of the northern lights. Thank you for sharing this one. It is as dynamic as the lights. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific and a fabulous wording of poetry,,,, A voice of honesty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write LeeJ |
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