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Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2003-06-26 10:46 PM

I shouldn't be
feeling this

d
o
  w
   n

spiral of my own self.
I'll get

   over
    it

but that's not the point.

*for a friend*

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-26 10:52 PM

Awesome advice. Great write. Never give up.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-26 10:57 PM

Rhonda, I really like this poem.....
especially
           the
               way
                   it
                      spiraled
                                       D
                             O
                                W
                                  N
                                    ~
                                      ~
                                        ~
                                          ~

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-06-27 12:15 PM

Great.......the imagery worked to!!!

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2003-06-27 12:27 PM

Sometimes it isn't the point! Well said, Rhonda. *hugs*

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

5 posted 2003-06-27 12:57 PM

Do you know you just paraphrased both you and I in our admonitions to each other?

Love you.

Kielo

It's so good to be home... :)

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2003-06-27 01:03 AM

Rhonda,
I used to have a bean bag love seat for just such occasions! Cool write to give a friend. You're the best.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2003-06-27 01:12 AM

"spiral of my own self."

I love that line...way cool...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2003-06-27 02:10 AM

Thank you, Rhonda.
You're such a good 'daughter'.
Love ya,
~Mum

P.S. Cool title!
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-06-27 04:41 AM

nodding in understanding

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