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Sleepless |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sleepless now the night has gone away and here again I in silence lay I hear my heart pounding in my head a dull ache where sleep should be instead the east is today’s not only break this punishment for a fool’s mistake and slowly wind these strings undone a passage lost where once was one "i am out of estrogen and i have a gun" |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
I've had many nights like this.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I'm having a night like this currently. A night where everything's breaking except the dawn. Good write. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
** Special apologies to my editor… (editor*ed) I KNOW it should be lie not lay…I hear you I hear you I hear you…but this took a life of its own ok? So…I call upon poetic license as my defense. You have forgiven me for much worse. Smooches…h ** |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful Lady!! I only wished I could give your mind rest as easily as I give you praise!!  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah poetic license..tis a beautiful thing grins Truth is I didn't even notice it until you mentioned it i was too lost in the feel of it..so cut her some slack editor grin |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ya, editors! You just gotta tell em who's boss every once in awhile!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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