Open Poetry #27 |
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Songs Of Rhyme |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Richened by the cream That wanders to top by seem Coloring the depths in joy Of every stirred and galloped ploy Fibrillating in the dawn Of every thought let rise in fawn Ripened in the sun’s ferment To spring before my eyes intent Smiles from the heart of times Blown on whims as trembles chimes Scenic travels gasped and stared Textures painted warm and shared Richened in good humor coats Flavored in pastel denotes Whispered lingers on the breeze Open hearted – loves slight tease Warm eternal calm to be Songs of rhyme eternally Copyright Kkh 6/26/03 |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Exceptional write....gotta read again, I was hollering at the kids and trying to read...besides the second time is always better! ![]() |
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SuperDave Junior Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 48Little House on the Hill |
I like this, good imagery. David |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This entire poem was so brilliantly written each and every word, but what held my heart were Fibrillating in the dawn Of every thought let rise in fawn Ripened in the sun’s ferment To spring before my eyes intent how perfect life gathers our dawns early light of a new day...birth of many to come flowing words and lovely write. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Warm eternal calm to be Songs of rhyme eternally Oh yes, Kathleen...this is so beautiful. Thank you, you really are a sparkly Diamond. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
mmmm, the images this brought to my minds eye are absolutely delightful ![]() It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
My heart tonight skips delight For This Diamond's lovely write This is so beautiful...I sort of feel like I am floating. Wow, I don't want this feeling to end Think I will go back and read again Patricia |
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