Open Poetry #27 |
I become.. |
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I'd like a little coffee with my sugar and cream, stare outside the window at a parking lot full of snow. Denial, my mind, it falls like a frozen flake. And I become the snow. Trees sway in a soundless wind, abound, my mind, it reticulates like the veins of a leaf. And I become the tree. A river flows with great fury. restless, my heart, it pours like a maddened liquid. And I become the river. My fingers intertwine with the lipstick stains on my cup. Perplexed, my soul, it decomposes like a motionless reflection. And I become... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Love the last line...... Wonderful write Kaoru! I loved it! |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
wow..and thats all i can say because it was just so powerfull, i love it! |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
waaaaw You became a good writer too.. Very nice words.. I love it.. Thanks alot.. Hugssssss |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
well done... |
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