Open Poetry #27 |
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We Have Only This To Offer |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We allow our skin to open in the presence of each other. The breath becomes a holy communion passed along in silence. Our tongues taste the sweetness of this commitment. We are temples to the truth of one another - Bowing only to ourselves. And so...the gods stir from deepest slumber. This love alone becomes our offering. It is enough. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
But we never get enough of your beautiful words! Perfectly written. ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a poem to linger on .... to absorb all its beauty. You have been again on a trip to Paradise I guess! We are temples to the truth of one another - Bowing only to ourselves. And so...the gods stir from deepest slumber. Sigh! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Just had to kick the AC down a few degrees...got awfully warm in here...hmmm, my electric bill his going to be sky high this summer if you keep posting, Ericc. That's OK, you are definitely worth it! Patricia |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Patricia, we wouldn't want Eric to post any other way....another treasure...another pleasure... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...this poem is so sensually appealing...enjoyed! |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
We are temples to the truth of one another - Beautifully Said! Wonderful poetry...))SMILES((( Tima C. Please visit my website: www.southerncountrywebdesign.com/~heart/ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc: This is the meaning of it all: We are temples to the truth of one another - This is just amazing . . . hurry! Go see Suetangs poem . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-23-2003 07:52 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I believe that love is the one thing that brings joy to the hearts of the Gods....It is all that we have to offer but it is priceless....A wonderful poem...I love it.. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, soft and easy. Is it really like this? Sandra |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is a great read! Thank you for sharing it. |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It is always enough, and never enough....an hour, a day, a month, a lifetime. Enough, and not enough. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really do love the way you write ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is simply beautiful, Eric. I enjoyed the read. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i love it now youre back y know...you make me feel like believing. ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, that truly is enough because it's all you ever REALLY need! (big hugggssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, you always know just what's valuable, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaaahhh... yes... it is truly like this. You capture so perfectly the beauty and light and essence of what divine love is. Your words play softly upon my soul, lingering to caress my heart. I still feel the sacred warmth of your touch, and embrace deeply within me this beautiful peace. Thank you. I love you, Moca |
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