Open Poetry #27 |
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drifting mind.... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA ![]() |
Words caressed my mind As I listened and cried Thoughts crashed into my heart As I thought and I cried I searched for the feelings That emptied into my soul As I cried I thought and listened Eyes closed - my mind adrift Hoping for a spirit lift Words and thoughts and feelings trashed Watched my sprit seeking light Saw my soul Heard my mind Stumbled on a thought Sighing crying thinking thoughts |
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Paul, haven't seen you much. Gosh, I relate too well to this. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Barry - thanks for the read - have been off pondering - plan to post now and then again - thanks for noticing I had been away - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah good to read you tonight Paul! You left much for us to ponder with this write. ~Well done m'friend...Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul Sometimes digging deep causes anguish as well as joy...certainly the journey sometimes trembles. I could feel your seeking in this poem. Hugs to you, my friend! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're not alone there |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HiPaul~ I've also noticed you've been off~ Nice to see you back~ 'Stumbled on a thought' Oh my ... I've done that a time or two or three or four or more myself ! Greatly enjoyed the read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Paul I was so pleased to see your name again here at PIP. Your words touched my heart and were words I could relate to. I hope all is well with you. "A friend bears the song in my heart and sings it to me when my memory fails" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WOW some powerful stuff written here! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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