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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-12 07:48 PM

In a house with,
no doors or,
windows.
Four corners, but
no locks, or gaurds..
No way in, yet
no way out.
Unless, persuasion is the key,
though,
no locks are there,
to open it.

In a house,
I lie restless.
No thrills to be sought after.
No love, hate,
pain nor sadness or,
anger.

I yearn to crawl under your skin,
begging for a way,
out and then again, in.
Place my tongue upon your heart, to see,
what is it you've been feeling
lately.
Lightly caress your veins,
feel the pulse of your pain..

We were both caught up..
in our own illusions..
we were both caught up..
in our seclusion..
And perhaps with a little,
persuasion..
I could open you up from the inside,
and see
everything you've hidden..

This is not
going to stop me,
no walls are
going to keep me from...

getting locked inside..
getting held captive by...
getting warmed by..
locked in an embrace with..

You are my illusion,
my seclusion..
Sweet, bitter,
persuasion..

This house does not exsist.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-06-12 07:52 PM

Very interesting write. I like this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-14 04:06 AM

interesting indeed

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-06-25 09:03 PM

giving this a bump so it can be read more.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

martina
Member

since 2003-06-19

Posts 59

4 posted 2003-06-25 09:32 PM

Hey great poem keep writing

martina

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

5 posted 2003-06-25 10:03 PM

"We were both caught up..
in our own illusions..
we were both caught up..
in our seclusion..
And perhaps with a little,
persuasion..
I could open you up from the inside,
and see
everything you've hidden.."

Loved that Kaoru...keep it up!!
Tima

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2009-03-28 01:56 PM

In a house,
I lie restless............."

I would go nutty!

ARCTIC WIND

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