Open Poetry #27 |
Something.... |
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
So lacey were the thoughts Were there ways they could be bought Did you weave them just that way Who tended them Now woven to a sigh A heart saw and cried A love held close An eye watched and shed Tears for all Had something we loved died???? |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"So lacey were the thoughts Were there ways they could be bought Did you weave them just that way Who tended them Now woven to a sigh" Beautiful words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Paul, this is heartfelt, sweet friend, I hate the thought of something dying and I hope this doesn't relate to you as it has to me before, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
very nice write! Tima |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul Sometimes it's obvious, and sometimes it just is. |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
A much enjoyed write! Thanks! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
brings the old lace hankerchief back to life..enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely write Paul..much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, enjoyed the read |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Heartfelt indeed! ARCTIC WIND |
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