Open Poetry #27 |
Out of my mind: back in five minutes |
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Fine, go write it on the wall, I’ve gone out of my mind, Left my troubles behind, Though there aren’t many I recall. But what did you expect me to do? Bang my head on the wall Till it turned black and blue? And you wanted me to confess? To what, I ask, Do you think I’m depressed? And I keep going back, To where the bridge meets the road, Where my mind jumps of the beaten track, When I should’ve just dumped the whole load But what did you expect me to do? Bang my head on the wall Till it turned black and blue? And you wanted me to confess? To what, I ask, Do you think I’m depressed? And it’s much colder here, Than it was, 10 minutes ago, Now I’m afraid to go near Myself, For what reason, I don't know But what did you expect me to do, Bang my head on the wall, Till it turned black and blue? I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And, she's back! You've been missed, little one... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Yay! It's sunshine... I've been here, I....I'm just a little mysterious....you just don't KNOW I'm here I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Nice to see you posting wind. Great writing < K's fav icon grin |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The Wind has finally blown back in! --"Now I'm afraid to go near Myself"--You too? I've had moments like that, and they ain't pretty! It seems I have them once a month! Luvs 'n Hugs, Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wind! Where have you been??? Your wonderful writing has been missed... May we ask for more please? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, hey you, if you DO that, I'll have to come over there and kick your you-know-what LOL, good to see you blow into the front door |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hahaha that's my favorite I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hey wind that looks Exactly like me! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ahh Wind....there you are. I have been looking for your writings. This one is a keeper...lol...I have been out of my mind for more than five minutes....but that's another story. Great post!! hugs, Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Aenimal: what? ohh... And I read what you said about me, you are just the sweetest guy ever. Oh, and I got that title off a teeshirt some boy was wearing, but it's exactly how I feel. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
What I said? Oh a coldplay fan too..see great taste in insanity |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Chris Martin is a genius. Sorry i spelled your name wrong. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
No problem..still don't know what i said? lol yes coldplay are brilliant still upset i couldnt get tickets..ah well next time |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thread: PLAESE READ you said that there are people here who aren't getting enough credit, and you said I was one of them. you also mentioned Gemjop and Inkedgoddess and a lot of other people, but you didn't mention yourself. And Thats something i haven't seen yet. Honey, you deserve twice the credit you get. You reply, and i haven't paid enough attention to that. Thats what you said. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I liked this from the title through the last line. *S* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Aye yer a sweetheart liz and nyet methinks I'm getting waaaaay to much credit lately but thanks..keep those poems a comin! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
me lady....we have been waiting you know? you're like royalty. we love you, and want you to post more!!!!!!!!! great to see your name here where it belongs, you never fail to wow me with your words Liz. ah yes, the coldplay signature. how cool r the present lines you're using. i like that one best. so true. yoouuuuu arrrrrree! love ya windy one....dont go all quiet on us again... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
p.s loved the title, very clever, made me laugh. i wish oh i wish i could leave my mind for five minutes. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
mmm yummy good poem...yes...i see you like coldplay? mmmmmmmmm mmmmmm good music, chris martin puts so much of himself in his work and you can feel it, much like you do |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I'l settle with that Gemma, thanks. I like being treated like a human best. Oh, and I always come back blame it all on a Rush of Blood to the head. I am going crazy I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Exhale: that's like the best thing you could ever tell me. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
lol! well its true, he just expresses himself sooo well and you remind me of him only you know a girl lol |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I don't think I've ever been anywhere were so many peple listen to coldplay. I thought I was the only one. My friends think I'm crazy. Shallow capitalistic Americans.... Exhale, we've been having new member problems, but you don't seem like them. I hope you stay. I don't tell many people that, i said it to Gemma and few others. You're a great poet to. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, If you can tell me something worth fighting for -coldplay [This message has been edited by Wind (06-25-2003 07:01 PM).] |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
well thank you kindly, its good to know i'm not part of the problem lol!....hmmm....although theres a part of me who wants to rebel!!! ahem dont mind me i'm just a little whoa hoo in the head...yes.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Liz... It's all been said, but I'll say it again anyway..... WE MISSED YOU IN HERE POSTING, MISS WIND!! Do you want us to round up a PIP possee and go looking for you next time you disappear like that? Well, we just might do it, ya know?? LOL Oh, I'm keeping this poem in case you do disappear again. Heart hugs to you, little Lady Ethel (Hey, Kit made me and Gary a little icon. This is it and it's called ethelgary. LOL Pssst!!! remember when I didn't know how to put the smilies on here? Well, I learned very well, didn't I??? LOL HaHa!! |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
well i'm glad that i'm not part of that group..oh those dirty evil little newbies..wait a secound....ahem yes anyways, thank you |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
oh goodnes ignore me i was being stupid and i didnt look on the next page..*sobs* goodness i'm very sad lol |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
The Gary smille is adorible. Honey, I missed you to. But you can't stop the wind from blowing. Exhale: ehhh...what? never mind. wow, I should leave more often. look at all my responses. Oh wait. Half of them are mine LOL I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Woooshhh! ~ What a wonderful write ARCTIC WIND |
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